The way you are is perfect Naked, raw, indisposed Soft like purple feathers Safe like chocolate silk Hold your hair, your face, your hips Love you till the end Naked as we came And still, we put on our snow jackets so that we stay warm.
I love this line: "Naked, raw, indisposed". It feels so cold and vulnerable. When you come in with the purple feathers and the silk, the vulnerability and nakedness of that line helps me feel those things like they're touching my skin.
Each line of this poem has a texture - you can feel every word as you read it. Beautiful work.
ReplyDeleteI love this line: "Naked, raw, indisposed". It feels so cold and vulnerable. When you come in with the purple feathers and the silk, the vulnerability and nakedness of that line helps me feel those things like they're touching my skin.
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